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| Edgar Wellington 2007-08-29 ch 1,  | abuseWow. This had me rivetted. It is one of the rare pieces on fictionpress that I wish would be longer. Welcome back, BTW. I used to think 13 was the worst year of my life (too young to be a real teenager and too old to want to be a kid) until I got to be 18 (the age at which one is treated like a teenager, but written off as an adult). I love the way you lead the reader at the end into an insane world: champagne and Walmart(extremes of adult behavoir); then confirm that it will be all the sign you need to recognize sanity. One thing to remember, passion like you have can be the root of what can become hugely enviable connections with other people. I for one, as remote as I will always be to you, do understand your passions. While you feel its destructive quality, mainly because you are still under someone else's thumb, and I felt this too, but in later years I have tried very hard to hold on to my passions, but you'll be surprised how everyday life eventually destroys or transmogrifies this in most people...perhaps it is for a good reason. Write more! |