   Onia Black 2008-02-01 . chapter 8i think that's a pretty chill idea
do it! |
 Eve O'et 2007-11-05 . chapter 7Short mulang!loved this chappie!so cute!waiting!
:) |
 Undrahas 2007-10-30 . chapter 7I to liked how it went, and your way to right! ITS TO SHORT!
But it was still good.
-Udrahas |
 A Frozen Flame 2007-10-30 . chapter 7aw. i love these people. lol. they're so cute.
great story. how about a whole new one with two completely new people? lol. naah, but i like riley alot. keep on writing! |
| Undrahas 2007-10-28 . chapter 6 M I would hate her to...Not exactly the best way to see your mom after years of abuse...
Good chapter again.
-Undrahas |
| Undrahas 2007-10-25 . chapter 5 It was good, but it got a little confusing after it said:
"A teacher a seeker
A both arms outreacher
My mother
That's who I mean"
Also the sentence that said: "Riley person smirked at everybody as she walked, actually sort of, skipped down the street." Only the first part made no sense.
Other than that this was a really good chapter...I hope you hurry with the next one becuase I would really like to know what happns next! Also the song, or something was really graet! It matched the story perfectly! Oh I espically love the Italasized part!
"Have you ever felt like nobody?
Just a tiny speck of air?
When everyone’s around
And your are just not there?"
-Undrahas |
| Eve O'et 2007-10-09 . chapter 4 OMG!WHAT?!just got the alert today...amazing, |
 stormfire8813 2007-10-09 . chapter 4hey!! no fair... that was the most evil cliff hanger EVER!! heh, love the story(s) hurry up and update... please? |
 sweets555 2007-10-08 . chapter 4*cough*
no way!
thats insane...
great job. |
| Eve O'et 2007-09-21 . chapter 3 Hello!OMG cool chappie, but please don't make Riley NOT love Brad, i can't take it!(OA?)Please?well nice story!Update soon!
-kathleen |
| Undrahas 2007-09-09 . chapter 3 nice! it was really good. so keep it up you hear me?
-undrahas |
| sweets555 2007-09-09 . chapter 3 a few grammar errors, but otherwise i loved it!
but uh...why couldnt she? |
 Fleeting Moment 2007-09-09 . chapter 3AA, that was awsome, is she afraid of loving?? U[DATE! |
 kathleen 2007-09-08 . chapter 2 OMG!I love your first story, i cried at almost every chapter. I hope you don't disable the anonymous reviews because I want to be with the sequel every step of the way hopefully.
Love the sequel!Hope Bailey can speak again soon!And a little more fluff with Brady and Riley! |
| Undrahas 2007-09-04 . chapter 2 RILEY AND BRADY WILL BE TOGHTER!
sorry but there my favorite couple!
awesome! keep it up! |
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