|Reviews for Feeling|
| Erlkoenigin 12/7/08 . chapter 1
schön padodox, habe lange darüber nachgedacht, aber gefällt mir!
| AK the Twilight 6/13/08 . chapter 1
Short poetry is tough. It's difficult to get a serious message out in such short line increments. This message, however, was simple, though it did feel accessible and real. There's something sympathetic in waiting for a loved one, despite the pain on the outside. This was short, but good. I did like your longer poetry more, but this was still a good poem to read.
| Twilight Starr 11/8/07 . chapter 1
| sleeplessblue 9/16/07 . chapter 1
wow! for being so short, that really packs a punch. Great work, k-doll. Keep it up. :)
| RedXfire 8/30/07 . chapter 1
So short yet to the point.
and hey... men dont like girls who play to hard to get LOL... well acually we love em but w.e lol
| XxXKristie MarieXxX 8/30/07 . chapter 1
Very short, I think it needs more.
| AuraBorealis 8/29/07 . chapter 1
poor you. hope it wasn't always like this. and while you wait for men, you might need more then coffe, they usally take forever if they ever show up.
| changed.by.an.afterthought 8/29/07 . chapter 1
my favorite line is the second one. it has a beautiful mystery about it like 'why does she enjoy doing that? or why is she in the first place?' great job.