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Short poetry is tough. It's difficult to get a serious message out in such short line increments. This message, however, was simple, though it did feel accessible and real. There's something sympathetic in waiting for a loved one, despite the pain on the outside. This was short, but good. I did like your longer poetry more, but this was still a good poem to read.

Cute poem.

Twilight Starr

wow! for being so short, that really packs a punch. Great work, k-doll. Keep it up. :)

So short yet to the point.

and hey... men dont like girls who play to hard to get LOL... well acually we love em but w.e lol

good job

RedX -_-

Very short, I think it needs more.

poor you. hope it wasn't always like this. and while you wait for men, you might need more then coffe, they usally take forever if they ever show up.

my favorite line is the second one. it has a beautiful mystery about it like 'why does she enjoy doing that? or why is she in the first place?' great job.

- changed