this is sad, but i really like it, ecspecially your first stanza; about the doll.

this a really good first-song, i know i couldn't do any better, you did great!

- abigail cathleen

Great song.

Good luck with songwriting and life.

Have a wonderful day. :)

~Twilight Starr~

this is a vary nice song with a good flow and a topic almost everyone can relate to i know i can remeber a time when i felt like a pupet too so yes it does happen to other people but no it dont last forever i promise :) ok well im done ranting now but again vary well written :)

It was awesome, especially for your first attempt at a song! Great job!
~aLi

i like it!!
i vote you put up the other one.

oh, my, I just love this part:

"Has this happened to someone else?

Has anyone felt this way?

No one deserves these feelings I have

and it feels like its going to last forever"

well, and the song is cool, to me it sounds like disappointment/rage but it's nice too.