 aiurwaves. 2007-10-22 . chapter 1this is sad, but i really like it, ecspecially your first stanza; about the doll.
this a really good first-song, i know i couldn't do any better, you did great!
- abigail cathleen |
 Twilight Starr 2007-10-03 . chapter 1Great song.
Good luck with songwriting and life.
Have a wonderful day. :)
~Twilight Starr~ |
 Ardie 2007-09-27 . chapter 1this is a vary nice song with a good flow and a topic almost everyone can relate to i know i can remeber a time when i felt like a pupet too so yes it does happen to other people but no it dont last forever i promise :) ok well im done ranting now but again vary well written :) |
 Alexandria Smith 2007-09-06 . chapter 1It was awesome, especially for your first attempt at a song! Great job!
~aLi |
 sweets555 2007-08-29 . chapter 1i like it!!
i vote you put up the other one. |
 kloun mannequin 2007-08-29 . chapter 1oh, my, I just love this part:
"Has this happened to someone else?
Has anyone felt this way?
No one deserves these feelings I have
and it feels like its going to last forever"
well, and the song is cool, to me it sounds like disappointment/rage but it's nice too. |