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| daisy dreams. 2007-10-22 ch 1, | abusethis is sad, but i really like it, ecspecially your first stanza; about the doll. this a really good first-song, i know i couldn't do any better, you did great! - abigail cathleen |
| Twilight Starr 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseGreat song. Good luck with songwriting and life. Have a wonderful day. :) ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Ardie 2007-09-27 ch 1, | abusethis is a vary nice song with a good flow and a topic almost everyone can relate to i know i can remeber a time when i felt like a pupet too so yes it does happen to other people but no it dont last forever i promise :) ok well im done ranting now but again vary well written :) |
| Alexandria Smith 2007-09-06 ch 1, | abuseIt was awesome, especially for your first attempt at a song! Great job! ~aLi |
| sweets555 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abusei like it!! i vote you put up the other one. |
| kloun doll 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuseoh, my, I just love this part: "Has this happened to someone else? Has anyone felt this way? No one deserves these feelings I have and it feels like its going to last forever" well, and the song is cool, to me it sounds like disappointment/rage but it's nice too. |