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daisy dreams. 2007-10-22 ch 1,	abusethis is sad, but i really like it, ecspecially your first stanza; about the doll. this a really good first-song, i know i couldn't do any better, you did great! - abigail cathleen
Twilight Starr 2007-10-03 ch 1,	abuseGreat song. Good luck with songwriting and life. Have a wonderful day. :) ~Twilight Starr~
Ardie 2007-09-27 ch 1,	abusethis is a vary nice song with a good flow and a topic almost everyone can relate to i know i can remeber a time when i felt like a pupet too so yes it does happen to other people but no it dont last forever i promise :) ok well im done ranting now but again vary well written :)
Alexandria Smith 2007-09-06 ch 1,	abuseIt was awesome, especially for your first attempt at a song! Great job! ~aLi
sweets555 2007-08-29 ch 1,	abusei like it!! i vote you put up the other one.
kloun doll 2007-08-29 ch 1,	abuseoh, my, I just love this part: "Has this happened to someone else? Has anyone felt this way? No one deserves these feelings I have and it feels like its going to last forever" well, and the song is cool, to me it sounds like disappointment/rage but it's nice too.