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123454321 2008-03-09 . chapter 1
Good rhythm and rhyme. It has a sing-song quatlity that bellies the subject matter.
The viewpoint of the liar instead of the one lied to is refreshing.
And, though I usually don't like this, your repitition brings your intentions into focus.
-J.A.
Courtesy of the review marathon (link on profile).
TragicDreams 2007-08-29 . chapter 1
It's good. I like the sort of twist at the end. Keep writing!
Ashelin 2007-08-29 . chapter 1
That was a nice little adding of "...honest". Good job.
Exodus.Escence Of Sin 2007-08-29 . chapter 1
very nice poem. i feel the same way with someone right now actually. mixed feelings are the worste but i love the poem overall.

exodus.escenceofsin
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