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| fatbird33 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abusei liked the last line and how it showed some remorse. good, good. |
| Onia Black 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseOMG that was so good ^_^ i'm not usually into reading poetry. But, damn girl, that was good. |
| Still-a-mystery 2007-09-01 ch 1, anon. | abusewow, that was amazing. I love your writing, it's brilliant... a fantastic poem.. I love vampires, they fasciante me, lol.. i know I'm talking like they're real.. who knows rite?.. anyway, loved it. |
| Margaret 2007-08-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseAh...yeah. It's so sad though. And untrue...I mean, vampires aren't real, but it's still sad. The poor girl! One minute, her life is perfect, maybe she's taking a midnight stroll, and the next, dead. By a fictional character. *Sighs* oh well. It was good. I like it. Really. I like how it's a short story/poem kinda thingy. |