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| Lies for Liars 2008-04-19 ch 1,  | abusewow. i loved this poem, i liked the short lines, they really added to the poem and the ending was amazing. keep writing! |
| Words.Left.Unspoken 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was amazing. I loved the line "Remnant of a broken home/Turned to anger" The ending was the best part. Keep writing! |
| softer side of apples 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseI TEARFULLY ENJOYED THIS POEM. I KNOW SO BADLY HOW THE GIRL ON THE BUS FEELS. THIS IS WONDERFUL.. |
| musicalady 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuseI like this, I really like this. It has a fast and abrupt pace that suits it very well. Good read!! |
| Choke on this 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abusequite lovely you made what would otherwise sound like teenage angst into something deeper, specially w/ the last lines. |
| WriterXO 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuseWow, I thought this was so sad, but it's very good!! I really like it. I love the expression- with the fish out of water. That would be my favorite part- from than on. So well written. Looking forward to seeing your other work. |