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| Rodmeister 2007-11-02 ch 1,  | abuseI too liked how you compared the knife to a night in shining armor. I think you got the emotion right on. I've never really asked anyone I know why they cut themselves, but this comes upwith a pretty good explanation. Nice poem. |
| Queen of Dragonnor 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseI like the part in the beginning of the poem where you compare the knife to a knight in shining armor. I also like how the knife has a voice of its own. It's creepy and gives you the chills when you read it. Great job on this poem. You expressed the mood and the subject nicely. |