Hey,

This was amazing. I bet that it would be even more amazing if you added on to it. I can really see the cicus lights and hear the sounds. I HATE PAGE RESTRICTIONS IN SCHOOL! It really makes you have to rush the endings and you never really feel like it was completed to the best of it's ability. I like the way that the clowns are murderers, killing the people that they inject with happiness. That is every twisted kids dream, the killing circus. Now I understand why people are so afriad of the circus. Nice to see your dark side. Happy National Novel Writing Month! I love Writers Circle. I am going to get a new account soon so that I can update from home. Be patient. Talk 2 you later.

Lady Alera Van Hexis
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