|Reviews for Carnate|
| catalyst.enigma 9/6/07 . chapter 1
| the Stranger in the moonlight 9/6/07 . chapter 1
Longing was wonderful in this... because nothing but what you long for can ever complete you. I love the last three lines, though these caught me even more.
Looking into her eyes was a pureness
A crystal clear torture inside of my bones"
The truth burns and thats what I got from reading these lines.
the Stranger in the moonlight
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 9/1/07 . chapter 1
Wow. I was pretty surprised when I started reading this, to be honest. An amazing, odd, but wonderful piece from you. I'm adding it to my favourites.
| SirScott 8/31/07 . chapter 1
That was an interesting piece. A lip ring sounds kind of painful. I never was one for piercings.
| she smolders 8/30/07 . chapter 1
This is good. Really good. And more then a little bittersweet.
| Chidori Nadare 8/30/07 . chapter 1
It's insane (in a good way). Very odd, and difficult to grasp. It's powerful and raw...
| Stella Grimshaw 8/29/07 . chapter 1
Definitely one of your more odd works but so so so powerful and deep. I loved the the all around insanity of it. Perfect.
| brynn amber 8/29/07 . chapter 1
really well done