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| catalyst.enigma 2007-09-06 ch 1,  | abuseDayum. Goodness. |
| the Stranger in the moonlig... 2007-09-06 ch 1, | abuseLonging was wonderful in this... because nothing but what you long for can ever complete you. I love the last three lines, though these caught me even more. "But Looking into her eyes was a pureness A crystal clear torture inside of my bones" The truth burns and thats what I got from reading these lines. ~the Stranger in the moonlight |
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseWow. I was pretty surprised when I started reading this, to be honest. An amazing, odd, but wonderful piece from you. I'm adding it to my favourites. Rowan. |
| SirScott 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abuseThat was an interesting piece. A lip ring sounds kind of painful. I never was one for piercings. ~SirScott |
| she smolders 2007-08-30 ch 1, | abuseThis is good. Really good. And more then a little bittersweet. |
| Chidori Nadare 2007-08-30 ch 1, | abuseIt's insane (in a good way). Very odd, and difficult to grasp. It's powerful and raw... -C.N |
| Stella Grimshaw 2007-08-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseDefinitely one of your more odd works but so so so powerful and deep. I loved the the all around insanity of it. Perfect. |
| brynn amber 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abusewooah powerful work really well done |