| Reviews for Carnate |
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catalyst.enigma 9/6/07 . chapter 1Dayum. Goodness. |
the Stranger in the moonlight 9/6/07 . chapter 1Longing was wonderful in this... because nothing but what you long for can ever complete you. I love the last three lines, though these caught me even more. "But Looking into her eyes was a pureness A crystal clear torture inside of my bones" The truth burns and thats what I got from reading these lines. the Stranger in the moonlight |
All Alone With Her Thoughts 9/1/07 . chapter 1Wow. I was pretty surprised when I started reading this, to be honest. An amazing, odd, but wonderful piece from you. I'm adding it to my favourites. Rowan. |
SirScott 8/31/07 . chapter 1That was an interesting piece. A lip ring sounds kind of painful. I never was one for piercings. SirScott |
she smolders 8/30/07 . chapter 1This is good. Really good. And more then a little bittersweet. |
Chidori Nadare 8/30/07 . chapter 1It's insane (in a good way). Very odd, and difficult to grasp. It's powerful and raw... -C.N |
Stella Grimshaw 8/29/07 . chapter 1 Definitely one of your more odd works but so so so powerful and deep. I loved the the all around insanity of it. Perfect. |
brynn amber 8/29/07 . chapter 1wooah powerful work really well done |