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| SirScott 2008-08-13 ch 9,  | abuseLol, at least, Matt is honest about what he wants from a woman. I'm glad that Hope and her dad made up. ~SirScott |
| RoseLife 2008-08-07 ch 9, | abuseAHH matt seems very cuute ;) cant wait to see what happens with him! aww everything seems happy with the family update SOON! keep the fab work up ^.^ |
| VelvetyCheerio 2008-08-06 ch 8, | abuseKey word: were. What happens next then, I wonder. The plot thickens, it seems. VelvetyCheerio. |
| VelvetyCheerio 2008-08-06 ch 4, | abuseWait, so she's a secret agent, in a band, and a prodigy? That's awesome! Also, what's with this Harland guy having to protect her? Are rival intelligence agencies after her brain or something? This story just gets better and better with each chapter. VelvetyCheerio. |
| VelvetyCheerio 2008-08-06 ch 3, | abuseWho is this mysterious Landon? Hmm. Pre-law student, knows who Hope is, I wonder if he's not a . . . stalker! Just kidding, I don't know. Let me keep on reading. VelvetyCheerio. |
| VelvetyCheerio 2008-08-06 ch 2, | abuseHey! I like this story already. I wonder who might be stepping out of that limo, though. Looks like I'll have to keep on reading to find out. VelvetyCheerio. |
| Xara Nahara O'Connor 2008-07-31 ch 8, | abuseThis story is extremely interesting, dear. I would love to be your beta, if I still can. I would also like to give a few suggestions and whatnot and also congratulate you on being able to come up with so many stories in a year. I can't do that anymore. Used to, but my brain is fried. |
| Xara Nahara O'Connor 2008-07-31 ch 6, | abuseHmm... at the start of the story, I would have never imagined Gideon and Hope together. Alas, that is the beauty of storytelling, always leaving the listeners/readers in suspense. |
| Xara Nahara O'Connor 2008-07-31 ch 5, | abuseWhoa! What the hell was going through Hope's mind? Did she suddently develop a crush on Gideon? How... insane, yet, it is awesome. Perhaps she was just teasing him and trying to make Madeline want him more out of sheer jealousy. |
| Xara Nahara O'Connor 2008-07-31 ch 4, | abuseHm... can someone smell danger? Jeez, Starr, you know how to write some pretty crazy stories. I like them, though. |
| Xara Nahara O'Connor 2008-07-31 ch 2, | abuseGideon reminds me of Clay from Xiaolin Showdown. He is definitely the nicest and most honest of the characters. I just thought that I would point that out. |
| Xara Nahara O'Connor 2008-07-31 ch 1, | abuseHm... this story seems a bit different than the others. I noticed that your stories incorporate very similar characters going through very similar situations (although some in a more real setting while others are in a more fantasy-like one). I never read Holding On To Hope, but I shall hopefully make it there after I am done reading this one. |
| random writers block 2008-06-27 ch 8, | abusedahling, it was mahvelous. couldnt have asked for better, except i find it odd that Hope is going along with it. |
| random writers block 2008-06-27 ch 6, | abusePeeing Toms i belive you might've meant "peeping toms" (sorry i've been away so long! just school and family, man it was bad!) |
| SirScott 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseFalling in public is always bad. Keep up the good work. ~SirScott |