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effervescent-sentiments
2007-08-29
ch 1,
abusePretty obscure subject matter and style, but I liked it. Refreshing?

Some of it was redundant, but not in a bad way. It fit, although it bogged the poem down and made it difficult to trudge through.

Good work,
Julia from Neo.
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