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| effervescent-sentiments 2007-08-29 ch 1,  | abusePretty obscure subject matter and style, but I liked it. Refreshing? Some of it was redundant, but not in a bad way. It fit, although it bogged the poem down and made it difficult to trudge through. Good work, Julia from Neo. |