Reviews for Fangs for Last Night

Reviews For: Fangs for Last Night

shy green rock 2007-11-12 ch 5,	abuseYAY! I hadn't read chapter five yet, but I'm liking it. Can't wait for the next one!
KiraLove 2007-11-07 ch 5,	abuseI'll beta. I have the time, and your story really is going well. It wouldn't take much to do, for you really ar a good writer. Let me know what you want to do! --Kira Love
Midnight Owl 2007-09-30 ch 4,	abuseGreat story and fantastic title! It's nice to find a story with a vampire who is quirky and a female lead who is interesting. I'm sick of reading stories about whiny girls and macho heroes. Wonderful.
Twilight Starr 2007-09-30 ch 4,	abuseThat would be weird. ;) Now he's going to have to go get the shoes back, lol. ~Twilight Starr~
Twilight Starr 2007-09-30 ch 3,	abuseGreat chapter. The guys picking out their outfits were amusing. ;) Have a wonderful day. ~Twilight Starr~
Lord Wotton 2007-09-28 ch 4,	abuseFor this story, I would give you the moon, the stars, and maybe even my pitifully depraved soul. I crazy dig O and Leah, and would bear O's children if it were possible. Sadly, due to a freak square dancing incident in the summer of 97 I am unable to reproduce, but I hope the knowledge that i would if I could lifts you up.
TwentyPoundNote 2007-09-27 ch 3,	abuseHave I told you, i love your title? Well I do! That Harry Potter T-shirt thing was so incredible funny, I burst out laughing in the Uni library and thereby gettin a lot of attention. Well done on this chapter - Your characters make such sweet drunks. Thank you for reviewing my story! I'm glad mine had the honour of being the first story you reviewed!
SamanthaNicole 2007-09-23 ch 1,	abuseGREAT title. Hence the reason I'm here. This story is fantastic. I loved Leah's mom, to be quite honest. Hilarious. The banter between the two of them was great, and Leah's personality is well developed. O is intriguing. I love that he can't work a cell phone, and that his little sister, so to speak, is giving him advice on how to get women. The MTV line was great. God, I love me some vampires. A few things: ...she didn’t think graduate schools, medical schools, law schools or future employers would appreciate a major in “Watching the Food Network” with a minor in “Browsing Arrest Records Online.”: Loved that line. And what college student doesn't like watching the Food Network? God, that channel was my obsession. "Leah had discarded criminal justice has a potential major..." 'has' I think was meant to be 'as.' "H had only gotten the phone because..." I think you meant to say 'he.' "Its awkward and artificial." There should be an apostrophe in 'its.' In any case, this was lovely. I'm adding it to my favorites, for sure. Can't wait to see where this is going. LOVE it. Cheers, Sammy
jammi 2007-09-23 ch 3,	abuseI really like the fact that Ricardo is a nerd. Normally vampires are dark and brooding, or gorgeous and slightly evil. But he's awkward, attractive but in a weird way, lol. And I like t he fact that his friends are weirdos as well. And Leah is a really great character so far. I like how you've built her character without info dumping but you learn so much about her. Really great story so far, love the set up and the description. And I love how you've made it for her to get bitten because I was wondering since she comes off as being really cautious as does Ricardo.
Twilight Starr 2007-09-01 ch 2,	abuseGood chapter. Looking forward to an update. :) ~Twilight Starr~
TwentyPoundNote 2007-08-31 ch 2,	abuseHaha, i think Chelsea hit the nail on the head, it the nerds in College that blossom into the sexy-rich types later in life. I love, love your characters, they're so well developed. I'm so interested in O goin to the club, i just no somethin weird is going to happen. Good job on this chapter and update soon!
TwentyPoundNote 2007-08-31 ch 1,	abuseHey! I love your plot its so refreshing! The dialogue between Amber and O was hilarious, good job on that. I can't wait until the vamp and science geek meet.
Twilight Starr 2007-08-30 ch 1,	abuseAwesome beginning. The summary caught my attention. I like the title. Some seperation between the scene changes of Leah to O would be good. It makes it less confusing. :) Good luck with writing and this story. I hope to see more. ~Twilight Starr~

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