Yeah, and you probably don't have anything against dickless guys named Johnny either, but it sure comes up a lot. Anywho, I was hoping for some mild sexual innuendo...but ya'know, beggers can be choosers. I'm all in love with your characters. They're so funny. Heroine seams like she's on heroine, Johnny needs to lay off the goddamn drugs, Ashlinn needs to get sprung with someone and Gabo needs to break up with what's his face because he's probably really unhappy. And why I'm getting so absorbed into this, I don't know. I think it's the sleep depreviation. I'm SO going to bed now...it's 1:30 in the morning here.

Anyways, update soon! Or a really cute yet subtley cuddly kitten gets shot in the face.

Okay Johnny! We get it! You're not friggin' gay. Anyways, I was almost hoping he was in the closet, ya know, to make Gabo happy. But I'm a straight guy so I probably shouldn't be rooting for that.

Anyways, I think all the other chapters were really good, and I think my favorite part of this whole story is the childish banter that flies between the four friends. From Heroine's idiocy to Johnny's lack of genitals, it all sort of flowed in a comedy fueled river, ya know?

But I'm not done yet, just one more chapter to go and I'll be done for the night. *yawns* I'm determined to finish this before my eyes shut on me.

Wow. That was friggin hilarious. And there's another chapter after it YAY. I love the banter they have going on, and how whiny Heroine is. Ashlinn seams to be reasonablly normal, but pretty damn funny, Gabo's my favorite, while Johnny kind've annoys me. But I don't care. I love your characters so you'll probably make me love him in the next couple. I give this first chapter tens across the board. It served its purpose of elightening the reader of the characters traits, and woman, if you don't finish this story I swear to god I will shoot something in the face. Thanks.

omg! so i just met this kid in my bestest friend's food prep class named steven who is, like, so into the girl pants and giant emo swoop and stuff and he's really really hilarious. AND he's mexican or something, so when i was reading this i thought of him and how his mom can't speak english and he has to translate everything for her. i think my friend made him say something like "i have a hundred babies" in spanish or something on friday. we were hanging out and he rode a giant giraffe.

anyway, this chapter was still hilarious just...'cause. all of them are. their little freak out over boobs was great. they should wake up in each other's arms or something just so gabo could spazz out about boobs.

“Jesus, I hate boobs.”

“Shut up, Gabriel. You just wish you could have some.”

xD

DUDE! watching random crap like skeleton stories is the best. rosco watches discovery health and TLC all the time.

poor ashlinn and her dead sister.

and gabo sounds excruciatingly sexy all wet and showered and smelling good.

youareamazerling!

The first time I read the line “OK. I’ll take one after you.”, I thought it said "OK. I'll take one with you." and I was all 'wait, what?!' But then I read it again and life made sense. :D

Anyways.

Yeah, it was kinda short, but I don't think it was crappy. At all. It was very funny. I loved the conversation about illegal immigrants, haha. Where do you get these ideas, fer serious!? Haha. I love this. You better update SOON!

YOU SAID THE WORD UTERUS AHAHAHAHA
sorry.
today my friend mentioned it and my boyfriend was like "what's a uterus?" and i just laughed. and laughed. and laughed.
hahaha i loved the story about how gabo's phone broke. nice :]
hehe. johnny is gay. HE MUST BE. i want gaboxjohnny action. can't blame the girls for teasing them, oh no, not at all. :)
guess what? now you have reviewerS! plural! ohohoh! yeahh.
UPDATE SOON!

“Fail!” Hahahaha! I say that ALL the time :] And I loved the change in conversation from penises to Pokemon. Hehe. I so beat the fifth gym leader really easily. But then the FUCKING elite four. ELITE. FOUR. FOUR! it's in the name. it doesn't say "the elite four PLUS ANOTHER PERSON!" which is should, because the "champion" dude is really tough, and i had no warning whatsoever.
it. cheats.
but anyways, away from pokemon, back to the story.
JOSHUA THIRD

AWW. Johnny and Gabo are so cute. I want them to have rampant sexy time, NOW. :D Hahahaha. I can't wait for a chapter from Johnny's point of view so that I can see how he feels about it all... And there's two more chapters up for me to read, so there's HOPE! :D Anyways, yes, much love to you, and this story, it's very nice. "Introvergated" made me giggle, hehe.

Haha I really like this. All the characters are fantastic. Gabo is adorable, but I would have to say that Johnny is my favorite. I'm a diehard Pokenerd like him and I'm not afraid to admit it.

GOD JOHNNY YOU'RE SO ANGST-RIDDEN. just face it, you are so gay. you wouldn't bold AND capitalize "not" in your head if you weren't.

“Let’s watch a horror movie! So, if Johnny or Gabo gets scared they can jump on each other and have sex.”

once again, i love how that somehow just leaks into every single thing they say. and it was wonderfully random. i giggled.

people on here are scared of paragraphs or something.

oh, and I listened to some of Breathe Carolina, and my favorite song out of all of them is "The Birds and the Bees". I think that's what it's called. the blonde guy is so shnuggly. x3

poor johnny was condemned to sign language by dirk. i could so see him doing the napoleon dynamite thing.

dude, since johnny is so gay, i think ashlinn or heir need some random dude to appear for them.

and gabo's broken-sex-cellphone. amaazing.

i'mma gonna advertise this. it needs WAY more attention.

mucholove.

ohmygod.

its like a giant love fest.
and theres going to be an epic foursome, and it will be amazing because all of them have pretty hair. yes.

okay, i love johnny and his headband and his pokemon. you have his little character down pat, i can tell. And the name Gabo-how the hell did you think up Gabo? It reminds me of Gumbo or Gumby. in other words, it's amazing.

i love how unbelievably believable these kids are. like, seriously, the part about ashlinn and heir drawing the creepy, distorted stick figures is so something that would happen in real life.

the non-stop talk about genitalia makes it even better.

all of this is the best crap ever. so keep writing.