I got the image that she was running off into heaven.

Very beautiful. You made me capture the scene.

This is really good... I like it a lot. It's so sweet and... I can't think of the right adjective. Soft? Gentle? Something along those lines. Basically, it's a very beautiful poem.

One word: beautiful.

I lovelovelove the imagery - 'clouds are like pearls,' 'the sea is like glass'.

It's so... alluring, I should say. It makes me wistful too. The sweet sensations just tug at you.

Brilliant. (:

Cute and well written. I see it as friendship d:) Or maybe romantic...

Either way, very well written d:) Kudos.

Gorgeous poem. I heart it. :) "Where the clouds are like pearls" - very nice. Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^