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| Cherrybombxx 2007-09-16 ch 1,  | abuseHell-ow;; this is Lea :] I just started going through your poems and I adore this, I've been sitting here for the past 5 min. just reading it over and over again, I related to this so much, you have no idea, you have such a talent :] a wonderful wonderful talent ^_^ |
| Hyperroll 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abusei like it. i can tell it's really personal and something that just.. hits home. i can mention a number of times that i've lost focus of the person i was, i am, i will be. i still have those situations. anyway, just hang in there. i know that there's no immediate solution that will help what you're feeling and all, but (this isn't good advice, but it'll make the confusion less demanding on your thoughts) try not to focus on it, and just do your best at wherever your life is at at this point. things eventually fall into place. so, keep your head up, Amy. once again, beautiful poem, you're an amazing writer. |
| A. M. Bussuvanno 2007-08-30 ch 1, | abuseThat was great! I could really relate to it, and I'm sure plenty of other people can. |
| sunshower 2007-08-30 ch 1, | abuseI feel I can really emphasize with this. It's strange, reading this, how much of myself I see your description of yourself. As for the poem itself; beautifully written, nicely structured, what more can I say? :) |
| Nacilme 2007-08-30 ch 1, | abuseWell let me start by saying I'm not very good at giving constructive criticism, nor do I feel like I should be the one to give it. But I wanted to let you know that I really conected to this poem, and I'll leave it at that, so I don't ramble on about things that doesn't make sense... =) Take care, Nacilme |
| wandless 2007-08-30 ch 1, | abuseI like that, asking who am I to you? Or who am I? I thought I would relate to one of the personalities/characters you put forward but I didn't. I was a bit disappointed about that. All the characters you put forward are sort of cliches..? Keep putting your stuff up, I love reading it! I can't wait for the next Honourshill chapter. |