Wonderful song.

It like it.

~Twilight Starr~

It was okay...not exactly draggy, but nothing really jumped out at me. And just a note: the 2nd line should be "with no one inside your heart to love".

Keep writing!

well, I really love this song, specially the first lines.

This is really good, gosh but its sad... where did you get such inspiration for such a beautiful poem? This was realy good!

~aLi

ohohoh!! i know this feeling...hate it...but i know it. great job, i adore it! going to favs!