Omg this is a great story. I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work.

Really enjoying it..please update soon!!

one of my favorites.
happy holidays and update.

this chapter was great!
it was really funny... shes a really likeable character.
morden teasing. ha. bringing isabell into the story is interesting. i cant wait to see what happens...and for some reason, kanes sour moods makes me believe that he will end up betraying his family in some way...
update quickly.

LOL
good job on the chapter

Well it sounds corny and you probably get it a lot but your story is REALLY good :) And for some reason (LOL) Im thinking that Gabriel and Maggie would end up being a GREAT couple together...

That was a lovely chappy, very pleasent introduction to a new character and some insight into some of the existing ones. And I loved the end, I totally lol'd. :P

Awesome chapter, I totally adored the end. I think Kane is going to be an ** the entire time but I loved this chapter. I can't wait until the next update woho

I love the way their relationship is progressing. Keep up the good, heart-stopping work!

Groovy story so far, I was worried when I read the synopsis that this might be another vampire story of slavery and torture turning into true love... It's disturbing how many of them there are. But no, your story is different so far and I like it. Good spread of characters each interesting and unique, good back story and world and a very interesting intro that pulled me in. Keep the great work coming, eh?

Oh boy is right. Oh goodness gracious. How can they keep away from each other? It would drive me utterly insane!

wow really like this story and cant wait for more you've got me hooked so please please please update asap

Oh, why did you stop! lol. I absolutely loved this chapter. Awesome job, I can't wait until the banquet.

I like this story alot,keep up the good work and *Please* update soon.

this is a REALLY good story. there are some grammatical and spelling errors (overall not just this chapter) but you've managed to write an engaging and interesting story.