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| xfail 2007-08-30 ch 1,  | abuseThis is absolutely marvelous. I love the story it tells; I love the slightly old words you used to add to the mood of the piece. Great job! |
| Nacilme 2007-08-30 ch 1, | abuseA very vivid story, and I love your use of words. The rhymes fit so well and the flow is good through the whole poem. Very nice work! /Nacilme |