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friendly.dinosaur
2008-07-31
ch 31,
abuseI just have to say that after reading this whole story in about, oh, a day - I'm absolutely in love with it. Not once did I just want to put it down, I was enraptured by the sure brilliance!

And after seeing who you pictured for Maggie, I just kept on seeing and hearing Lauren playing the part. It was perfect!

I could TOTALY see this becoming a movie, man. For reals.

Can't wait to start on the sequel.
Julie
2008-07-27
ch 31, anon.
abuseI love you.
True, honest-to-God adoration.
I love you for Deb and Maggie and Danny and the Matheson grandparents and everyone else! Especially sweet, amazing Davie. I must admit though that I kept waiting for a flaw. Anything! Even as small as incessantly popping his jaw or as horrible as an extreme dislike ofJohnny Depp which is unforgivable, IMO. (I loved the mention of him at the reception. You won me over forever at that moment.)
I would've logged in to leave a review but I'm too lazy. And I loved your story so much that I felt I /had/ to write one so consider yourself lucky inspite of my log-in laziness. ;]] Now please excuse me as I must visit your profile page to find out about Danny and Janie...

(Expect severe disgruntledness if I don't find an at least half-finished story. *evil grin*)
chornoykot
2008-07-23
ch 1,
abuseThis story is fun, well-written, and incredibly interesting. You really feel involved with the characters, and you get that little tug on your heart every time something sweet or sad happens. THAT is the mark of a great writer :D
AmareAgape
2008-07-21
ch 31,
abuseOMG, I know it has been a long time since you wrote this story... but I gotta say... You made me I cry like a baby, laugh out loud, and get so freaked out my heart was pumping like crazy. Plus it was mind-blowingly brilliant and witty. And I gotta say, that's quite an accomplishment. It was truly amazing and it was a pleasure to read it. Thanks for the story!
smackcrackbushwhack
2008-07-20
ch 31,
abuseWow, that was awesome! I read the first half in one big lot and then had to go away on holiday - I've just read the rest. I loved every minute of it! Thanks so much for writing this, it was such fun. Um, I would carry on gushing, but I'm desperate to go and see what else you've written.

Thank you, this was a fantastic story!
TwoClovedHooves
2008-07-18
ch 17,
abuseI just googled Maggie Matheson. I notice that it did not get mentioned that she is (according to the site) really a he in the Japanese version.
Well, I'm off to bed.
book.babe15
2008-07-15
ch 31,
abuseomg this story was amazing! i'm going to go read the others now!!
Blood Sinister
2008-07-06
ch 8,
abuseOhmygosh, SLIDING DOORS!!

You mentioned sliding doors in your fic!

I now officially love you. And your right, Jerry's a sleazeball, but Lydia is the WORST. Especially at that bit where she orders a sandwich and Helen walks in! And then Helen falls down the stairs!

By the way, did shortblondhaired Helen die??

Er, anyway, I want a David please. He is just adorable and I love him!
Lady Knight 1512
2008-07-05
ch 31,
abuseI have one question. Is David widely available or is he strictly limited edition? Coz i REALLY need to get myself one. Seriously, i loved this so much. This kind of story is right up my alley, and i have to say, you did this a lot better than some of the published authors i've read.

Maggie was so hilarious. LoL. OMG. She was just ... i don't even know. She's completely crazy. I don't know how David didn't run screaming. I didn't like her when she broke things off with David though, even if she thought it was for his own good. Seriously. What an idiot. I hope she felt guilty!

The fact that she was dreaming of David was remarkably cute. And i didn't even have to stretch my imagination to believe it! LoL. I have dreams like that too sometimes. Dreams about future events i mean. They kinda run in my family, at least on my dad's side. The eldest child born into the family has them. My little brother thinks i'm making it up but Dad believes me. ANYWAY! I was a bit jealous of Maggie. I only dream of stupid, insignificant things, like reading a particular page of a book that hadn't even been published yet (imagine my surprise when, 4 months later, i turned a page and there it was, the exact same page from the dream with the exact same words). Yeah, i was never lucky enough to dream myself a David. Shame.

In particular, i loved the school dance, the scene in the cafe just after Maggie meets him at the university, and the classroom scenes. Overall though, i absolutely adored this.

~LK1512~
katieee
2008-07-05
ch 31,
abuseThis was unbelievable.
Completely unbelievable.
I loved it.
I read the chapter titles, and I completely got thrown off by this one. When it had complications or whatever and the sad titles and then this, i was like awh crap. He died and now she doesnt dream about him.
You dont know how glad I am to be proven wrong though.
I want a David Matheson. I really do. He is the perfect guyy.
And Im excited to read Story of You, because I loved Danny in this.
Man, you create the best guys
Lauranthalsala
2008-07-02
ch 21,
abusewhile you're at it
could you please mail order me a david matheson too?? XP
(I'm referencing your Author's Note, just in case you don't remember)

This story is awesome.
I worship the creative ground upon which you walk.
I love this story
and i LOVE Danny. I know, it's blasphemous to like the other character better...
but he's closer in age... and so funny
though David's just pure awesome :D
Thanks for finishing this story like two years ago?? so i could read it now :P
doesn't have quite the same ring to it :P
Silly-girl15
2008-07-01
ch 31,
abuseok let me just say this storie was...freakin amazing! cant wait to read the next one! :)
Birds and Boats
2008-07-01
ch 31,
abuseaw i really liked that, although the concept of the second one doesn't really capture me, i'm going to read it out of good faith because this one was amazing. It shows me that love doesn't have to be like the harlequin romances i like. You practically had me bawling when he gave that mickey mouse splashdance record. I could also really relate to maggie, seeing as i myself am a movie buff. Although she made me realize i have a lot of catching up to do.

"You could say life was a stupid traditon. Don't analyze it, just go." Guess where thats from :)
Cassandra Lauchlan
2008-07-01
ch 14,
abuseYou know why I love you. It has to be because you mentioned the labyrinth. You made my heart melt. Amazingness.
Faith Adeline
2008-06-27
ch 31,
abuseI thought this was a very good fic :) Sure, she made TONS of BAD-D-D-D-D decisions, but it all worked out in the end :) Great job, I'll definitely be reading the sequels and some of your other work as well :)
Faith
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