I've finally finished reading all the chapters of this story and i must say...that this is quite impressive. I really liked how you shared some information at the very beginning of the story. I really like how you portrayed Balt's and Soria's characters (although I'm curious to know what other powers Soria possess). I hope you'll continue this story, because its pretty good.

Awesome chapter! Loved the fight scenes.
Wow they're brothers... definitely didn't see that coming.

Great job! I can't wait for the next update. ^_^

Nice starter to a new arc... I wonder who that boy at the end is. But that spear guy sure had poor luck... man, he sucks :D But the scene was quite funny.
Can't wait to find out what happens next, so update already!

Nice intro to the next arc... Brook was kinda a wuss and all, but I laughed a few times during the read, so good job on that. I'm also wondering about those other, ring leaders (hopefully much stronger then the one presented in this chappie) and even more about this masked boy.
Hope you'll update really soon!

Cool chapter that really explains some of the strange events from previous ones, but also brings more mysteries into the mix. I like the way you portraited Balt and Soria, makes me symphatize with the more.
And Sieg doesn't exactly look that bad, especially compared to that Raihn guy.
Overall: great work and I can't wait to read more!

This chapter was pretty funny, though I do feel a tad bit sorry for Brook. I wonder who the other bandits are, but currently it seems there's another enemy. The upcoming battles does give the impression of being complicated with few-way stand-off.
Great job so far, update soon!

Certainly an interesting development. So Soria is a scroll, while Balt carries a demon inside. This will probably prove to be problematic in the future, but so far it's a great explanation for everything that happened.
On the other hand you left us wondering even more about Sieg, his power and organization he's in. Damn you! XD
Off to read more!

Nice conclusion to the fight... I wonder what were those markings on Soria's body. Certainly there are a lot of question concerning both her and Balt. Hope you'll answer them soon.
Good job on this chapter.

Nice, humorous entrance to the next arc... I wonder how is that masked boy at the end and how will Balt and others fight against those goons. Update soon!

Ah, so things are clear now... and more question arose :D
I do hope you'll get deeper into Sieg and his organization in the near future, coz the whole talk about Core's etc. made me wonder what the hell is going on :D
Off to read more.

It's been a while since I read this, so I needed to check the previous chapters, but this one rocked! Balt's power was freaking awesome, although I hope he won't be using it too often, coz right now he seems invincible in that state.
Many questions arose in this chapter: what were those markings on Soria, who is Madeline, who is that mage... off to read more!

More of a humoristic chapter, but it was really fun to read. I can't wait to see what those bandits are gonna be like, but so far it seems there's another enemy to deal with. Wonder what is taht all about.
Can't wait to find out so please update soon!

This was a great chapter. A lot of questions were answered, but plenty new appeared... this is so like you ;)
Anyways: the story is going great. I like the main plot and can't wait to see when it'll lead. Off to read more.

Well, this chapter looked more like a comedy one as the fight was not really demanding, but the ending certainly got my attention. Who is that guy that attacked Balt? And those other people, that trio of Dark Horns... enemies seem to be all around. Can't wait to read more.
Update soon.

That's what I call rush! From one battle to the other. I wonder what this guy at the end is... he seems to know about Balt; how's that so? And more enemies seem to be appearing really soon. I can't wait for an update, so write more soon!
Great job!