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WhinyPoetryFromGenerationY 2007-08-31 . chapter 1
Completely insane...but pretty fantastic. I really like the characters you create.

Hope this gets updated!

Kate
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Tranquil Thorns 2007-08-30 . chapter 1
Wow. I love the originality.

I adore the dreaminess of it, just the very thought of someone wishing all their lives to live on the moon. I like the voice of the narrator, and the 'planning' he does to travel to the moon.

The lines around 'it’s become much more unrealistic' saddened me. D:

The ending completely caught me off guard!
Domo 2007-08-30 . chapter 1
good good good qrite more this is great
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