| Reviews for Moonpie |
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WhinyPoetryFromGenerationY 8/31/07 . chapter 1Completely insane...but pretty fantastic. I really like the characters you create. Hope this gets updated! Kate )0( |
Tranquil Thorns 8/30/07 . chapter 1Wow. I love the originality. I adore the dreaminess of it, just the very thought of someone wishing all their lives to live on the moon. I like the voice of the narrator, and the 'planning' he does to travel to the moon. The lines around 'it’s become much more unrealistic' saddened me. D: The ending completely caught me off guard! |
DomOx 8/30/07 . chapter 1good good good qrite more this is great |