 Tranquil Thorns 2007-08-30 . chapter 1Wow. I love the originality.
I adore the dreaminess of it, just the very thought of someone wishing all their lives to live on the moon. I like the voice of the narrator, and the 'planning' he does to travel to the moon.
The lines around 'it’s become much more unrealistic' saddened me. D:
The ending completely caught me off guard! |