Reviews for The Wingmaker - FictionPress.com

Nemonus 2007-09-02 ch 1,	abuseVery pretty, with nice detail, and I wanted to know what would happen next. "Wingmaker" sounds like a very cool concept. One issue: why are the wings intrinsicly "against the rules of God"?
Iccle Fairy 2007-08-31 ch 1,	abuseI really lie this, especially the lines, Three, and she’s free, She’s a bird on the wing, She’s an angel, Made of riches and rags, Newspaper and threads of silver and gold, and Poetry in music, Music in the air, Air from the mouth of heaven, And heaven is in the air. She is an angel, just lovely :) thankyou for sharing that with me :)
The Doorknob 2007-08-30 ch 1,	abuseI love this. Beautiful choice of words and images... it makes me want to get out my pens and draw a picture to go with it. Simply amazing.
Tranquil Thorns 2007-08-30 ch 1,	abuseBeautifully vivid. 'As a line of hot wax joins feathers to skin' is perhaps my favorite line, followed by 'she replies that/that will never come.' The feelings are sweet and powerful.