I did like! Too short though 8(

Very good, I like the rhythm. This piece flows very well and I could see it almost as being in a song. Again, nice work with this piece.

Interesting poem. Nice descriptions.

~Twilight Starr~

Interest. It tells a story and is still entertaining to read.

Nice. I like the rhythm. That's always the main thing I look for in poetry and this has it. That first bit reminds me of "Are you gonna be my Girl" by whoever it was that sung it. Keep writing, you rock. :D