It was good, I liked it. How you bolded and italicized certain letters and words, and broke (heh) some words apart really seemed to epitomize both the pain and anger you are feeling. Great job.

Have you ever heard of Emily Taylor? Great poet. This reminds me of some of her pieces. Anyhow. You did an EXCELLENT job on this. The whole thing had my heart, ha ha. I should stop reading poetry. I fall in love with everything.