Reviews for Two Canoes in a River

Camalot777
2008-06-11
ch 1,

abuseI think that I've found your strength in writing: Dexcription. You totslly painted a picture in my mind (sorry for the over-used phrase, but that's what you did). Some stress was going on at my house when I was reading this, and your story sort of calmed me down. Everything was perfectly placed in my mind: The sound of the floute, the gentle rocking of the boat, the breeze, everything. Great job on the description again, because I stick at that asort of thing.

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