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Reviews For: How the Hyenas Got Their Laugh

soojinyeh
2007-09-26
ch 1,
abuseHahaha lol. Love it. Read and review me please.
Jean Brooks
2007-09-03
ch 1,
abuseI also liked how your story was fast pace and quick to the point. The beginning completely captured my attention and kept me reading until the end.
Taltush/MeiMei
2007-08-31
ch 1,
abuseThe first line made me think of mascots and different schools, not animals. Strange. Anyways, I think this story is cute. It's written simply and clearly, rather in the style of old-fashioned tales. I like how each thing progresses. It was easy to keep track of the story and it was entertaining. Quick, concise, and funny - just what a story should be. Nice job.
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