I really enjoyed this story! It was well written and I loved it!

Wait,what? :o

Holy Crap I love it! It's so well written and totally original! Way better than the way I write! I'm very jealous now. (:

a bit cheesy and corny at the end there... i didn't really like the plot and all but, you gave it a shot and it might have worked, if you had a better reader other than me, that would laugh at any bits revolving around little children's fairytales and horror movies... :D lol i'll think i'll be laughing for days now thanks to you! :D keep up the good work... don't have a favourite quote.

Another great story. And I liked the ending, it was really cute.

Nichloe

ew creppy old lady! i'm glad they didn't die though. and they're together! Well, sort of ish anyway

Wow...it came to an end so quickly but it was good! I hope you make a sequel!

Finally the freaky women is dead

I liked the way they got saved

yey he's going to her school, cant wait to see whats going to happen

Aww the ending was really cute. I love happy endings.

I'm glad they were found.

Good job on this story!

I loved your story! My favorite quote was :

“You two have been worrying your parents quite a bit,” Rob said, at the same time Mr. Hope whispered, “What happened?”

“James fell in the river, so we went to her house for help. She abducted us, and tried to kill us,” Emily replied impatiently. “What took you guys so long?”

haha thanks for writing it.

I like it! And I can't believe they kiss... that's so cute

OMG! I usually don't read stories like this, but this story rokks! Update soon please.

wow!

that old women is a total FREAK!

I cant wait to see what happens now that he kissed her and its been days.

Wow, this really is a good story! Hurry and write more..I'm dying to see what happens next! By the way, the Maude woman is a freak! lol!

Aww they kissed!

I can't wait for more, so update soon please