It was really good, actually.
I like it.

I like this, the shortness makes the emotions stronger I think. I hope that you keep writting poetry. You are mot trash either, I hope that you decked the person who even thought such a thing.

keep it up.

It's hard to get back to writing poetry after a long absence but inspiration comes along eventually.

The thoughts you bring up in this are intriguing though and the emotions are still powerful even within a few short lines. Take care and it's nice seeing you begin to write again.

ooh! dark and scary poem! but short. i would like this one to be longer :D i really like the theme. defintly go bad to poetry! you seem very talented -suze

you are not trash. i like it. it's a little dark, but deep none the less. go back to poetry!