Reviews for Promise Me Forever

ihrtbks 2007-09-01 ch 1,	abuseCute! And I like how you hid some stuff instead of trying to reveal everything! It seemed a little rushed to me, but that might just be me. You might want to add stuff to dialog like how they said, what they did while saying it, how the other reacted, etc. You could put something after every other line or so without cluttering it. But still a very enjoyable story! GREAT JOB!
outsidersgirl 2007-08-31 ch 1,	abusea good one
Midnight Destiny 2007-08-31 ch 1,	abuseGreat story u've got here! I particularly liked the way u described ur chars at the beginning of the story. Tho i dun fully understand wat's going on yet, i can see tat its gonna b interesting. the pig part brought certain mental images to mind, tho. Lol!