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| Kusje 2008-01-06 ch 1,  | abuse'In this world, there are people/Who never look at the sky' Great line. Amazing. The story was interesting to read and I like how you put the poem at the end. It makes the reader think. |
| awooshkanibble 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abuseI really , Really, REALLY enjoyed this... You wrote it so beautifully, and you say you did it in eighth grade? I am truly impressed. I don't have a single bad thing to say and no correction to anything because I found no mistake. Keep up the great work. You seriously have a LOT of potential and I'm sure you'll be a published author one day. :) |