The last line made me smile. Nice work.

Twilight Starr

you texted this to me!

I knew I remembered it from somewhere

haha.

I love the imagry.

Picturing a girl painting the wall

a bright red, for some reason.

erasing all the pain, and past.

the ending really struck me.

so sudden. almost broken.

loved it.

This is just...true. It's the perfect metaphor for a pain someone's trying to hide, cause in the end, you find you can't hide it anymore...

I've only heard one other poem inspired by paint. I love this. Great job! *adds to favs*

It's quite unique of you to use painting for writing inspiration. I don't think I've ever read a poem about paint...

Anyway, I like how you were able to take a simple, everyday object and make it a metaphor of life. I never thought of paint like that!

Interesting. I never really thought of painting in that way. Good job.

Ooh... That ended on a completely different note than I thought it would. It was deep! That was a great effect. That thought that you've got at the end there is simple and yet so intensly interesting at the same time. :)