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| Twilight Starr 2007-11-24 ch 1,  | abuseThe last line made me smile. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| life like whoa 2007-09-07 ch 1, | abuseyou texted this to me! I knew I remembered it from somewhere haha. I love the imagry. Picturing a girl painting the wall a bright red, for some reason. erasing all the pain, and past. the ending really struck me. so sudden. almost broken. loved it. |
| Ammom 2007-09-06 ch 1, | abuseThis is just...true. It's the perfect metaphor for a pain someone's trying to hide, cause in the end, you find you can't hide it anymore... |
| Keira Pakusu 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abuseI've only heard one other poem inspired by paint. I love this. Great job! *adds to favs* |
| Youkai Author 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abuseIt's quite unique of you to use painting for writing inspiration. I don't think I've ever read a poem about paint... Anyway, I like how you were able to take a simple, everyday object and make it a metaphor of life. I never thought of paint like that! |
| Ashelin 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. I never really thought of painting in that way. Good job. |
| Jeanie Gordon 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abuseOoh... That ended on a completely different note than I thought it would. It was deep! That was a great effect. That thought that you've got at the end there is simple and yet so intensly interesting at the same time. :) |