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Twilight Starr
2007-11-24
ch 1,
abuseThe last line made me smile. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~
life like whoa
2007-09-07
ch 1,
abuseyou texted this to me!
I knew I remembered it from somewhere
haha.

I love the imagry.
Picturing a girl painting the wall
a bright red, for some reason.
erasing all the pain, and past.

the ending really struck me.
so sudden. almost broken.
loved it.
Ammom
2007-09-06
ch 1,
abuseThis is just...true. It's the perfect metaphor for a pain someone's trying to hide, cause in the end, you find you can't hide it anymore...
Keira Pakusu
2007-08-31
ch 1,
abuseI've only heard one other poem inspired by paint. I love this. Great job! *adds to favs*
Youkai Author
2007-08-31
ch 1,
abuseIt's quite unique of you to use painting for writing inspiration. I don't think I've ever read a poem about paint...

Anyway, I like how you were able to take a simple, everyday object and make it a metaphor of life. I never thought of paint like that!
Ashelin
2007-08-31
ch 1,
abuseInteresting. I never really thought of painting in that way. Good job.
Jeanie Gordon
2007-08-31
ch 1,
abuseOoh... That ended on a completely different note than I thought it would. It was deep! That was a great effect. That thought that you've got at the end there is simple and yet so intensly interesting at the same time. :)
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