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| Twilight Starr 2007-11-24 ch 1,  | abuseDeath is so tragic. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| theatrical rhapsodies 2007-09-22 ch 1, | abuseOh, how sad. I really liked it. I like how in the beginning, when it says "Days, Weeks, months" it is in regular font, but at the end you use the bold and italic and underline; it makes it seem like the pain gets stronger as the time goes by. Very nice piece. -theatrical rhapsodies |
| Gleechumber 2007-09-10 ch 1, | abuseI lost my best friend five years ago- never gets any easier. Thank you for sharing this with us. |
| life like whoa 2007-09-07 ch 1, | abuseshort. to the point. harsh. raw. powerful. oh my goodness. loved it hun. |
| Ammom 2007-09-06 ch 1, | abuseOmg, I'm sorry. :( It's short, but so sad. I can't say I've lost a friend that way, but I've lost them in others. What I liked about this poem was how you ended the last three lines in bold, underline, and then italic. Something about it made it appealing. |
| angeloftheninthorder 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abuseThis is a truly mournful piece and it latches on. I keep wanting to read it again. |
| Jeanie Gordon 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abuseThat was a very nice (though sad) read. I've read it several times now and I still love the rhythm and suond of it. I'm going to put it in my favorites to read more later. :D |