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Reviews For: Autumn's Last Farewell

Gemma Lovell
2007-11-26
ch 1,
abuseFirst and foremost, thanks so much for your reviews! I know I've been long overdue returning the favor, and I hope you'll forgive me for it! This sounds like a really great beginning to a story, and your imagery is phenomenal. Great job!!
~Emma Lovell Cullen

PS: Check out user SisterBear. You might like some of her stuff.
Soryn
2007-10-05
ch 1,
abuseOh it's very descriptive and sounds so beautiful when read aloud. I love the scene it describes, especially leaf falling from the oak tree to the ground. I'm going to read your story.^^

Thanks for reviewing my work. I really appreciate it.^^
Twilight Starr
2007-10-03
ch 1,
abuseWell written, brilliant excerpt.

Have an awesome day. :)

~Twilight Starr~
a silenced revolution
2007-09-16
ch 1,
abuseVery beautiful imagery. It has a wonderful, magical feel to it. Nice work.
FIREBRAVE
2007-09-16
ch 1,
abusenicely written
good descriptions
keep up the great work

God bless,
FIREBRAVE
Tranquil Thorns
2007-09-02
ch 1,
abuseLovely descriptions. (: I like the wonder in it, too; the words you chose for the gyrfalcon's flight read magically.

Just the one correction I noticed; 'its' instead of 'it's'. =X I think you made that mistake once or twice. I just *had* to point that out, sorry. D:

Nevertheless, very lovely! I like how you concluded with winter falling. I'd like to read more.
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