Very beautiful descriptions. They painted such vivid images in my mind that I could almost imagine being there.

[water droplets glistened like diamonds as they clung to the green blades] That was my favorite line. Very Beautifuly phrased.

[Its grey; almost white] I think that should have been a comma.

Very beautiful work :)

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First and foremost, thanks so much for your reviews! I know I've been long overdue returning the favor, and I hope you'll forgive me for it! This sounds like a really great beginning to a story, and your imagery is phenomenal. Great job!!
~Emma Lovell Cullen

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Oh it's very descriptive and sounds so beautiful when read aloud. I love the scene it describes, especially leaf falling from the oak tree to the ground. I'm going to read your story.^^

Thanks for reviewing my work. I really appreciate it.^^

Well written, brilliant excerpt.

Have an awesome day. :)

~Twilight Starr~

Very beautiful imagery. It has a wonderful, magical feel to it. Nice work.

nicely written
good descriptions
keep up the great work

God bless,
FIREBRAVE

Lovely descriptions. (: I like the wonder in it, too; the words you chose for the gyrfalcon's flight read magically.

Just the one correction I noticed; 'its' instead of 'it's'. =X I think you made that mistake once or twice. I just *had* to point that out, sorry. D:

Nevertheless, very lovely! I like how you concluded with winter falling. I'd like to read more.