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| Gemma Lovell 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abuseFirst and foremost, thanks so much for your reviews! I know I've been long overdue returning the favor, and I hope you'll forgive me for it! This sounds like a really great beginning to a story, and your imagery is phenomenal. Great job!! ~Emma Lovell Cullen PS: Check out user SisterBear. You might like some of her stuff. |
| Soryn 2007-10-05 ch 1, | abuseOh it's very descriptive and sounds so beautiful when read aloud. I love the scene it describes, especially leaf falling from the oak tree to the ground. I'm going to read your story.^^ Thanks for reviewing my work. I really appreciate it.^^ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseWell written, brilliant excerpt. Have an awesome day. :) ~Twilight Starr~ |
| a silenced revolution 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseVery beautiful imagery. It has a wonderful, magical feel to it. Nice work. |
| FIREBRAVE 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abusenicely written good descriptions keep up the great work God bless, FIREBRAVE |
| Tranquil Thorns 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseLovely descriptions. (: I like the wonder in it, too; the words you chose for the gyrfalcon's flight read magically. Just the one correction I noticed; 'its' instead of 'it's'. =X I think you made that mistake once or twice. I just *had* to point that out, sorry. D: Nevertheless, very lovely! I like how you concluded with winter falling. I'd like to read more. |