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| animejerk 2008-05-09 ch 8,  | abuseyea bo but yeaa at the same time rodio needs love i love him hugs doll of rodio besides i think enrick is a little creep there u have no idea what he thinking in his little perveted head of his hahahahahahaha ema should of said yes but only as a friend way kind of thing u know what i mean other great chapter but raido need love glops rodio he way cutter anyway sticks touge out |
| wi11ow 2008-04-22 ch 6, | abuseyour stories are awesome ! please continue to write! |
| animejerk 2008-04-05 ch 6, | abuseNIOIO I LOVE U RODIO HUGS HIM HE SHOULD BE LOVED MORE WA I DONT LIKE ENICK HE SOO STIFF I LOVE RODIO CAUSE HEE CUTE HUGGE TIGHTER HE SOO CUTE WHEN HE WIGGLE...OH NO I THINK I KILLED HIM |
| Eurochild 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseHur, what can I say? There's just too much dialogue. You didn't give any descriptions, nor did you build up any kind of storyline; it's just an extrememly long conversation. Now, I'm not saying you should get rid of the dialogue, but you should definately put more enthasis into the actual storyline. A story is not just people talking. So if you work on your descriptions, and plot then your writing will be incredible. |
| animejerk 2008-03-31 ch 5, | abuseASOME DUN DUN THUNDER STICK BOOM DAN GOING TOO FALL FOR EM AND THEN THERE GOING TOO BE THREE GUYS FIGHT OVER HER HOW LUCKY CAN A GIRL GET THO I LIKE NICK THE BESTEST I LOVE THIS STORY UPDATE MORE |
| animejerk 2008-03-29 ch 4, | abuseTHIS IS ASOME WHERE HAVE U BEEN WA NO SHE WONT DIE HE BE BCK IN WORLD OF OWN |
| animejerk 2007-09-21 ch 2, | abusehehe honesty im hoping for rodio and emma hehehehheheheh you are the best uv ever vread a fanfic like this its almost like a play aswome |
| Xx-Fay-xX 2007-09-08 ch 2, | abusethat was so interesting! Guess what...I know youll never guess...MY NAME IS EMMA! I have problems!BYES!! |