The way you describe stuff is amazing. Seriously detailed. I'm quite jealous. lol

And I luv the story idea. Keep up the good work.

Love

the tothpaste fiend

I love stories like this, just the right amount of description and nice short chapters! Now, about the story itself, I really liked the Prologue! It's keeping me waiting!

Brett! Brett! Brett! Brett! Brett! Brett! Brett! Brett! Brett! Brett! Brett! Brett! Brett! Brett! Brett! Brett!

Oh wait, we haven't met him yet. :(

Okay, so this is pretty much the most AMAZING story ever, I am in LOVE with it.

And I still want to marry Brett, by the way, he sounds HOT.