Reviews for Punishing the Tormentor of the Starved

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Mister Black 2008-08-07 ch 3,	abuseI've been playing review/reply ping-pong with GrannyP for a while, and I noticed you read her a lot too. I had a little time before work today so I figured I'd give this one a whirl. So...Andrea is batshit insane. Cool. I honestly can't concieve how someone could be a professional model without suffering from some kind of acute mental illness. I've only made it to chapter 3, so I won't comment too much more. 'll put in some more time later tonight. Gotta go make some money, 8.Black
kingrankar76 2008-08-06 ch 13,	abuseThat's a hoot. What is she doing? I like it that she can play the officer. She totally brought it on to herself. But seriously how much longer is she gonna keep her mouth shut about her family and Frank? Loved the insane act goin on in this chapter. Please update soon.
VelvetyCheerio 2008-08-05 ch 13,	abuseOh, she's good. I love how Danny got all, "where is your commanding officer?!" on Judy's butt. Hmhm, the wickedness is extremely enjoyable. You keep it up, Twilight. If you update, I read and review. VelvetyCheerio.
VelvetyCheerio 2008-08-05 ch 8,	abuseLoved the ending, hate Frank. Andrea can wait, he must go first. Ah well, I suppose I will have to wait and see what happens in the other chapters. VelvetyCheerio.
VelvetyCheerio 2008-08-05 ch 6,	abuseI'm loving this! I loved the little revalation part they had, it gets me everytime I see it. Poor Web, getting all dramatic and stuff. Still great. VelvetyCheerio.
VelvetyCheerio 2008-08-05 ch 4,	abuseI really don't like Andrea! She makes me angry. I hope they beat her up or something, I don't know. Anyway, I like this story. I'm going to go read more. You keep it up, girl! VelvetyCheerio.
GrannyP 2008-08-04 ch 13,	abuseUh oh, voting already ended now. No biggie. I'm sure I wouldn't have won anyway. Well.. um... I know it's a bit late for this, but I caught a mistake I didn't catch before. I think Iris was supposed to have said "why wouldn't I be" instead of "why would I be"... I have no idea how I overlooked that before. But yeah, I do that sometimes. Nice work! I saw that you have some new reviewers. Congrats!
SirScott 2008-08-03 ch 13,	abuseIris and Danny got the police detective to back down. It's good to read an update. Keep up the good work. ~SirScott
Xara Nahara O'Connor 2008-07-30 ch 10,	abuseInteresting and angsty chapter. I like it, although there wasn't much about "revenge plots" in there. I still love it, though.
Xara Nahara O'Connor 2008-07-30 ch 8,	abuseWow... that chapter wasn't lame and corny. Finally, Pearl becomes more of a dominant character than the rest. She and Raven are probably my favorites.
Xara Nahara O'Connor 2008-07-30 ch 5,	abuseYep. I'll admit. This is my favorite story out of all of the ones you have written, although I think about Reckoning almost every day.
Xara Nahara O'Connor 2008-07-30 ch 4,	abuseWow... I am curious to see how much of a useless appendage to the family her mother actually is then.
Xara Nahara O'Connor 2008-07-30 ch 3,	abuseHeh. Why didn't the principal call security and get Andrea out of there? Not that I mind how things ended. I understand that standing up to a super model is very hard to do, which is why you probably didn't have any adults doing anything about it... although, you could have had someone stand up to Ryan's defense. After all, he was the "star" of the school. I am not telling you to change the story. I am just giving you some ideas of what could have happened in my mind. Either way, great chapter.
Xara Nahara O'Connor 2008-07-30 ch 2,	abuseO_O. Great job with the plot twist... this is going to get interesting!
Xara Nahara O'Connor 2008-07-30 ch 1,	abuseI love the opening for this story. Sorry it has taken me forever to look at it. I've been busy putzing around on other things. I am home now, so I will probably send more time reading your stories and will eventually read them all.

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