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| Twilight Starr 2007-10-08 ch 1,  | abuseGreat poem. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Gemma Lovell 2007-09-26 ch 1, | abuseGood, but you've written better. Your english is still pretty good, but in the line "telling me she might is dead" the "is" should be "be". Keep it up!! ~G |