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| Lian Bynum 2008-10-10 ch 17,  | abuseLol! This story's character reminds me a lot of myself and I absolutely loved that. Great job!! |
| Green Eyed Angel 2008-10-08 ch 17, | abuseThat's cute. Really unexpected ending, you know? You should have titled it "epilouge", as I was all WTF? WHAT HUSBAND? Yeah, i'm insane. Dale deserved to have his ** kicked for trying to leave. And slapped, good girl Rae. Why was his punishment not cruel and violent and torturous? Huh? THough I do forgie you for that, haha. Rock on! If ya know what I'm sayin'. |
| bookwormhottie 2008-10-07 ch 11, | abuselove it |
| Slender Smile 2008-10-03 ch 17, | abuseHi pinkamoo,:) i just completed reading this story of urs coz coz coz my sis asked me to read it. Lol...jst joking. Yes, my sis read it and tld me its wonderful coz its funny. But as i started it, i cudnt resist completing.:) It was wonderful reading ur story. |
| patatoface 2008-09-06 ch 2, | abuseHA! doodle what a funny name |
| patatoface 2008-09-06 ch 1, | abusei finaly got around to reading one of your stories and at firsti tought the girl was pregnat and then i thought the mother had a REALLY REALLY bad hangover then i thought the mother wasa pregnat |
| Electric Rose. 2008-08-31 ch 17, | abuseAw! Yay!! Awesome story :D |
| Electric Rose. 2008-08-31 ch 15, | abuseHah. And now, she's cursing at tellytubbies. What next? And, on a completely unrelated note, AHH!! HE'S MOVING?! |
| Electric Rose. 2008-08-30 ch 8, | abuseROFLROFL. I absolutely loved this chapter, i laughed so much. (quietly though, cos I'm not supposed to be on the computer o_O) Hehe. Kangaroos, and little boys with tranquilisers. Awesome chapter :) |
| CrossMyHeart 2008-08-02 ch 17, | abuseAWW! that was the most ADORABLE story EVER! CUTTEE!! XxCrossMyHeartsxX |
| claireponcherrii 2008-07-29 ch 17, | abuseaw |
| rockjam 2008-06-16 ch 17, | abuseNice story. I liked it. It had its funny times. haha. :D |
| Katemonstah 2008-04-19 ch 8, | abuseOMFG! YOU CREPY CREEPY PERSON. I WAS JUST STARTING TO READ THIS CHAPTER AND CUPIDS CHOKEHOLD CAME ON MY IPOD AT THE SAME TIME. HONEST TO GOD. O__O *hyperventilates* |
| WittyWings 2008-04-14 ch 17, | abuseOk, so for one, I'm going to claim I have absolutely no life if I spent almost, and nearly my whole evening reading the whole bloody thing. But thanks to your humor in the story, lmao, I don't mind. :D Great story by the way, and your wicked sense of humor out did it. :D Poopsquat. Yea try adding THat in a sentence next time you talk! :D Lol `Witty |
| bubblie130 2008-04-12 ch 16, | abusei loved the end of this chapter(16), it is SO cute |