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| PrincessPeaches 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseAww this is sweet. You can tell you had jut broke up with someone! |
| DiaRose 2007-09-10 ch 1, | abuseI think you have nice ideas, and some very good lines stored up in your head, but you need more words so you can make more good lines. I notice you seem to have a couple really nice lines in each poem, but the rest is just built around that. I can relate, I do my best not to do the same thing, but you need to work on that. Love, ~Dia |