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Reviews For: UNTITLED REALITY
PrincessPeaches
2008-03-02
ch 1, 		abuseI can relate to this...It's brilliantly portrayed!
DiaRose
2007-09-10
ch 1, 		abuseI don't like the ending, but the beginning is very nice. You need better words, though. You haven't described the feelings you're trying to convey, you only state them.

Love,
~Dia
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