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| Twilight Starr 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseGood story. You have to space in between paragraphs otherwise your text gets all grouped together. Then the reader can't read it. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Gemma Lovell 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuseTHAT WAS AMAZING. Gah, you're a very good writer, but this could be the best thing you've written yet! There were a couple of grammaticla errors (four, if I remember correctly), but otherwise it was brilliant. I loved the end, too. You packed a lot of stuff into a small word count and it's...I can't think of a good enough adjective. You rock. More than before. Love, Gemma |
| KuteVampire 2007-09-06 ch 1, | abuseI like this. It seems like it should be some kind of play. |