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Reviews For: Shimmering Light in a Shimmering Soul

Twilight Starr
2007-10-08
ch 1,
abuseGood story.

You have to space in between paragraphs otherwise your text gets all grouped together. Then the reader can't read it.

~Twilight Starr~
Gemma Lovell
2007-10-04
ch 1,
abuseTHAT WAS AMAZING. Gah, you're a very good writer, but this could be the best thing you've written yet! There were a couple of grammaticla errors (four, if I remember correctly), but otherwise it was brilliant. I loved the end, too. You packed a lot of stuff into a small word count and it's...I can't think of a good enough adjective. You rock. More than before.
Love,
Gemma
KuteVampire
2007-09-06
ch 1,
abuseI like this. It seems like it should be some kind of play.
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