   I Murder on Impulse 2008-11-28 . chapter 13I love this story! |
 WatchMeHunt 2008-11-25 . chapter 13one of the best writers and one of the best stories
i love it, and you know...i love the touch of reality the most.
can't wait for the next update...hope its soon :) |
 muchmusiclove 2008-11-15 . chapter 13OMG OLEASE UPDATE!
this is a very good story! |
| leemya 2008-11-14 . chapter 13 Love your story! hope you continue writing. |
| Farheen 2008-11-01 . chapter 1 PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! |
| novea21 2008-10-28 . chapter 13 Please update...I'm missing this story and its characters... |
| novea21 2008-10-22 . chapter 1 I'm not giving up hope yet...Please update soon!! |
| Farheen 2008-10-22 . chapter 1 Lol, after reading some of the other reviews, I have to admit I think I'm most charmed by Alex. He seems to be a real sweetheart in his own unconventional way. Oh, and I think all of us reviewers would truly appreciate it if Katie accidently fell down a flight of steps and broke her neck...just saying...Lol! |
| Farheen 2008-10-22 . chapter 13 PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!! |
| novea21 2008-10-20 . chapter 13 So I know this is really soon to be writing another review but this is one of only a few fictionpress stories I had to read in one go with no breaks and felt connected to so cloesly. The references, flashbacks and images of Jamie seem to haunt me; you intertwine the past and the presemt so seamlessly I feel images weaving in to one another.
I cried for Jamie and Nicole though. Although I have never been in love, I've always oscillated between the value of such a stong emotion and the pain that it has the power to induce. I was hoping that Nicole would learn from her mother's mistakes but would find that the soul-wrenching passion we are all looking for is still attainable without self-destruction. But that's just an inherent fear I have at making mistakes and having to live with them.
Needless to say whatever direction your story takes, I will follow loyally like a soldier addicted to the tortuous burn of napalm. Please try not to shatter my belief in an innocent love though. |
| novea21 2008-10-20 . chapter 13 No! If love has to be this hard why pursue it at all??I mean isn't that basically the lesson she learned?? Please convince me otherwise coz I feel like my own heart is breaking... |
 kagurasan5 2008-10-14 . chapter 13update please! |
| kagurasan5 2008-10-14 . chapter 11 omg. dang you katie! |
| kagurasan5 2008-10-14 . chapter 10 i wanna say that the whole pregnancy thing was just something made up by katie... right? |
| kagurasan5 2008-10-13 . chapter 6 i dislike katie too. she is a bitch. LOL |
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