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| Reah86 2008-07-12 ch 174,  | abusei like it, it's short yet bitter-sweet |
| Reah86 2008-07-12 ch 176, | abusei like this one |
| Scarlett Wynter 2008-06-11 ch 178, | abuse"beautiful min" - ? mind? mine? 0.o eh, just a silly typo. otherwise, this is a pretty awesome poem, I like how you can take imgarery like striking strings and such and make them so creative and detailed in a lovely way, where as most people would just end up making them clichéd. kudos to you. :) I think there's a lot of us, well I know I have, convinced my heart to live in a lie even though I know the truth...sighs... |
| simpleplan13 2008-06-11 ch 178, | abuseBeautiful min,... did you mean mind? I love the last line. It's a beautiful description. The rest of the piece is nice as well, but that was my favorite. |
| Scarlett Wynter 2008-06-08 ch 176, | abuseI can relate to this. "roguishly stealing every smile of you" is my favorite line because it's such a neat image. I hope to read more soon :) |
| Scarlett Wynter 2008-06-06 ch 172, | abuseI love this, especially the last three lines! thanks for sharing your poetry :D |
| Scarlett Wynter 2008-06-06 ch 175, | abuseThis is an awesome poem, it's so sad and beautiful. |
| Scarlett Wynter 2008-06-06 ch 174, | abusewhat a lovely poem! I like the rhythm a lot. |
| Scarlett Wynter 2008-06-06 ch 173, | abuseI like this, but I think the last line should say "sit" not "sitting" |
| Scarlett Wynter 2008-06-06 ch 170, | abuse"diving/ into glass shards tracing a dream" - I love this line. :D |
| simpleplan13 2008-06-05 ch 173, | abuse"You always love icecream," Ice cream is two words. I like this.. the descriptions are nice and the its very innocent and sweet, except maybe that first line.. lol |
| simpleplan13 2008-06-05 ch 174, | abuseThe line tonight is one sounded a bit awkward and unnecessary. Other than that, I liked it a lot. It flowed well and it was very sweet. |
| Scarlett Wynter 2008-05-25 ch 167, | abuseaw. this is so cute, in a sad way. great work. I love how your poems convey so much emotion and imagery. kudos to you :) |
| simpleplan13 2008-05-24 ch 170, | abusethe And you line seemed odd... and them what? Upon pure snow blankts of faith,... blankets I liked that line though because it was a really sweet description. Nicely done! PS If youre bored this weekend check out the Review Game's Review Marathon (link in my profile) |
| simpleplan13 2008-05-24 ch 169, | abuseNot a big fan of capitalizing sun... Here only the heart arrive on skins longing for love...arrives Interesting description of this place, but it has a slightly happy ending, which is nice, I like that. |