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| 1Wanderer 2008-01-07 ch 1,  | abuseI hope you don't end up like your baby blanket too. Your poem gave a sense of comfort, admirable because that is what you aimed to do. Good job and thank you for your review. :) |
| simpleplan13 2007-12-29 ch 1, | abuseI can picture the blanket and the smell.. great job |
| painted.music 2007-09-29 ch 1, | abusekonban wa *sniffle* This reminds me of my own "Blankie," which I had from infancy... and then it just disappeared. I remember finding it again in first grade, buried in a box in the attic - torn but still usable. My parents freaked out that I'd found the box because they'd apparently rid me of the habit of sleeping with Blankie. And then, it was gone again... and I only found a tiny sliver of fabric one or two years later... *sniffle* I can still remember the smell and how the fabric would feel when I rubbed it against my cheek and wrapped it around my finger. *sob* I haven't thought of Blankie in years! Thanks for the memories... *adds to favs* Zaijen -Shan- |
| Captain-Dalien 2007-09-10 ch 1, | abuseAww... This reminds me of my baby blanket!! They sure do put up with a beating, don't they? lol. Kudos. ~CD |
| Basara 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abusesweet memoir and description... nice... |
| Definition 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseAww, this is cute and it made me smile :) Very nice tanka. |
| Chidori Nadare 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseI can really relate to this, even now. I like stretched to/Transparency. It flows beautifully and the last line has that hint of humor. Nice tanka! -C.N |
| a silenced revolution 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseNice wording. I like "stretched to/Transparency". Good tanka. |
| Moon's Poetess 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseHa. I had a blanket once, it disappeared and reappeared 2 years later as a bad of tangled-threads. I was heartbroken. But on to more pressing topics... nice little poem! It flows beautifully and catches that little bit of extra interest you need in the last line ^^ Good work! Moon's Poetess |