Why does he wear suits everywhere? I want to read more of this.

oi, you so had better write more soon, okay?

oh my god, pretending to be gay. priceless!

Haha. I freaking love this story. I have no idea where you came up with the premise of this story, but I cannot wait to see more. Go, Dane, go. And do I foresee romance for our daringly devious Dane?

What a fantastic plot! It's very clever and intriguing - the kind that gets readers hooked onto the story from the beginning. I loved the dialogue - it's very witty :)

Please continue the story! I'd love to see an update from you soon :)

LOL this is funny-more please?

This story is made of awesome (with a teaspoon of wow). I want more really bad. I think it's my new addiction.

That is great! Poor Dane though... Having to act...And getting thrown out of his house. For what? $100,0? That's materialistic... I hope that's spelled right...

This story is simply fantastic. Your writing style is impressive and very nice. I rather enjoy all of the characters and I simply cannot wait for more! I do hope you plan to continue soon!

you have got to update this... and quick... please please please...

i find the concept funny and good and god i can't wait for how this will be developed...

please update soon

This story is so interesting and full of surprises, I love it!

Dane in the suit was cool as well, I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Heh heh, cool. I like where this is going. And I love the image of Dane as a college freshman in a suit - lol

This story's really amusing. I can't wait for you to update again! :) You're such a great writer, I can't help but love all of your stories.

Im in love with your stories ;_; Cant wait for the next chapter!

I know I've said this with the other stories of yours that I've reviewed, but this is amazing! How is it that you manage to write so well? You make Mysty feel inadequate of her own skills. *emo corner*