;_; It's insanely sad because it's true.

I don't get it, either.

- Koko.

I really, really enjoy this. Short and elegant.

I like your poem because its so real. I don't get the joke all of the time and it does make you feel like that.

Rising Flame 94

Sometimes I don't get the joke either. Good poem.

Twilight Starr

Aww... I know how that feels, kinda. I mean like I'm always the last one to kinda understand something...

Aww, that's so sad. I love the raw feeling behind it (for lack of a better word), and the realness, if you get what I mean.

Aw, that's very sad... but the imagery is raw. You left out "a" when you said, "I'm freak 'cause." (Should be "I'm [a] freak..." And one more little thing: pauper is that type of word I was telling you about that is kind of old-fashioned. "Begger" or "homeless person" is more common.

I think you're poetry is definitely improving, though. :D

The simplicity and the raw emotions behind every single word was amazing. This poem makes me want to stop and think twice about everything.

It seems unfinished. But I liked for it for the most part. Keep it up!

Kristie Marie

good work and you are not a freak

i really like your poem.

i don't know how to explain it.

but i really like it.

I think i'm going to favourite you now