|Reviews for Freak|
| Kawaii Koko Michi 6/1/11 . chapter 1
;_; It's insanely sad because it's true.
I don't get it, either.
| Eve's Deception 3/24/08 . chapter 1
I really, really enjoy this. Short and elegant.
| Through Glass Eyes 12/13/07 . chapter 1
I like your poem because its so real. I don't get the joke all of the time and it does make you feel like that.
Rising Flame 94
| Twilight Starr 11/8/07 . chapter 1
Sometimes I don't get the joke either. Good poem.
| beautifulaughter 9/29/07 . chapter 1
Aww... I know how that feels, kinda. I mean like I'm always the last one to kinda understand something...
| Queen of Dragonnor 9/19/07 . chapter 1
Aww, that's so sad. I love the raw feeling behind it (for lack of a better word), and the realness, if you get what I mean.
| sleeplessblue 9/16/07 . chapter 1
Aw, that's very sad... but the imagery is raw. You left out "a" when you said, "I'm freak 'cause." (Should be "I'm [a] freak..." And one more little thing: pauper is that type of word I was telling you about that is kind of old-fashioned. "Begger" or "homeless person" is more common.
I think you're poetry is definitely improving, though. :D
| she smolders 9/13/07 . chapter 1
The simplicity and the raw emotions behind every single word was amazing. This poem makes me want to stop and think twice about everything.
| XxXKristie MarieXxX 9/4/07 . chapter 1
It seems unfinished. But I liked for it for the most part. Keep it up!
| AuraBorealis 9/2/07 . chapter 1
good work and you are not a freak
| J. Kim 9/1/07 . chapter 1
i really like your poem.
i don't know how to explain it.
but i really like it.
I think i'm going to favourite you now