Reviews for Expressions of Love: Gay Marriage

Reviews For: Expressions of Love: Gay Marriage

Destiny2RoseClan 2008-08-08 ch 1,	abuseblinks Wow...I seriousely applaud you dude/dudat. I seriousely do. Gay marriage should be put in. This may have been a "jumble of opinions" but really, it spoke alot. You make sense even if alot of things were smushed together. Gay marriage is just as a right to be just as any other marriage. Really, no human has the right to stop someone from doing something that they know is right. Love is love, what can one do about it? Great job though.
Jean Brooks 2007-09-03 ch 1,	abuseI agree with you on some points, with Christianity clashing with gay marriage. Indeed, gay marriage can have positive effects, but marriage is simply marriage. It depends on couple to couple whether they prefer to adopt a child or not. I don't think promoting gay marriage would definately guarantee a decrease in the number of orphans or overpopulation. Ever since the 1980's when AIDS first broke out, it was primarily referred to as the 'gay disease'. Since then, gay men have been terribly discriminated. My point is, some time in the future, this prejudice against gay men will have to lessen before promoting gay marriage. I, myself, have nothing against gay marriage. I believe it's completely up to the person to make that choice. However, in society now, it's very difficult to be married as a gay man and live a normal life.
the mighty lu bu 2007-09-02 ch 1,	abusenice to see you still buy into that grade school myth about every one coming to america to escape religous intorelance or the rules. with the exception of plymoth and maryland most people came to america for money, thanks to this i have an essay in mind. thank you. no for the rest of the essay, one could consider homosexuality a by product of lust, not saying all gays are lustful, but ** and hetro both come from the same desire, lust. No negative effects, are you naive. everything has negative effects, it doesn't matter what it is. you have one point, gay marriage does not mean its going to cause the laws to allow people to marry animals or multipule wives and husbands (i wouldn't put it past utah though) i'm kindsa of annoyied that this essay became a seperatin of church and state essay. But thats besides the point, seperation of chur h and state is not in the consitution, though the freedom of religion is, also as i explained in an essay way back when (the truth about democracy "wink wink) being a democracy means that the government has the right to make any laws they want, and if it conflicts with the constituaion or some supreme court ruling all they have to do is amend the constituation, or pass laws changing the courts jurisdiction. your last paragraph is damn near incoherant. back i shall tackle it anyway, why because i have noting better to do. Gay marriage would have positive effects, and your point. adopting kids? thats it. Adopting kids. How about this for a positive effect of gay marriage. It would raise revineus for our government because of the marriage tax. Our government needs money anyway. to continue on your paragraph, "No more overpopulation, yay" you had to say it, that statement is so stupid my IQ went down 5 points, (thanks). Just because gays are getting marriaged does not stop over population, do you think all the straight couples are going to decided to stop having sex because gays are married now. or do you think if this one adopted kid now has a home with a gay person that the world population will drop by 1. c'mon, the rest of your essay was someonewhat intelligent, but that statement. Just to make it simple whether or not gay people are allowed to get married the worlds population is still at 6.5 billion people (thank you wikipedia). Just figured i'd infrom you of that. less crime, are you saying all orphans unadopted orhans are crimminals, that seems alfully judgmental for someone who is saying give gay people right to marry. crime caused by a group of problems, but the two major ones stemming, form poor parents, and bad schools. Don't you dare say gay people will be good parents, becuase they are still people, some will be good and some will not. and your second to last line, "A gay couple might adopt a kid and raise them right, or you can ban gay marriage and get mugged by that kid in a few years". Never end a persuasive type essay like that. it makes people not interested in what you have to say, its kinda like saying, if you don't listen to my essay about becoming a christian, you are going to hell. or maybe if you people vote democrat we all are going to die. pointless extreme circumstances that make an essay far less apealing and persuasive. in closing, i know i'm coming off a little rough but this is all in an effort to foster better esays, with a little research i recomned wikipedia and google, would could make and informative essay. the mighty lu bu

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