Your writing is exquisite! Everytime I read something by you, it takes my breath away! Thank you for sharing this with us! I can't wait to see the results of the contest either, good luck in writing it!

This is fantastic so far. I can't wait to see the next chapter!

:P


By the way, the sixth line/paragraph down says: "Tall slender men in dark extravagant dark robes..." Just thought that sounded a bit awkward - using dark twice and all.

Update soon! I'm looking forward to the acompanying comic as well!

Best,
M

Ho-e...
So this is where the apprentices will come in the play!!
Wow. Can't wait for October 20th! X3
I wanna see Kita in action!! But that's not for sure so I'll stay put.
-keeps alert-

oh, so that is Ioannes! Much love for you! Its really interesting! I love these kinds of things so much!

Wow. You have amazing writing skills as well as art skills 8D I can't believe it. Loved the first chapter! Can't wait til you drw it out!