HAHAHAHA! Omg, I'm gonna so teach my kids *bits and pieces* of Chinese when I have kids just so I can have them do the same to their father dxD!

"“Okay, kids, let’s just speak English because Daddy’s a white man and can’t understand our yellow talk,” I told them in a mock serious voice."
dxD!

Ha. Perv.

Horrible influence, Mel.

I want your pet! D:

Beautiful ending, Mel. d:)

"I reached the church in about 15 minutes and sat in the car. I had my suspicions that it was going to rain soon so I hurriedly got out of car and looked around. The church was small and homely but there was a fence surrounding it. I frowned and didn’t feel like walking through the church to get to the grave site to the other side. The fence was a chain link fence and I smirked. Putting both hands on the fence, I put my right foot in one of the diamond holes. In less than a minute, I successfully trespassed onto God’s property.

Great.

I scanned my surroundings and noticed about a hundred gravestones in the green grass. Huh, I should have asked Hanna which was his site.

Great."

That's a lot of sarcastic "great"'s in one section dxD Sounds exactly like you, Melly dearest d:P

Yes Mel, no more gambling with people's lives, okay? d:P

"I cried every night for you to come and talk to me or even save me. Those few nights were my happiest moments, we were so dirty. "

Hah, the second sentence there is just so random d:P

But aw...that was a very touching letter, Mel.

And so is the part as she screams to no one in particular, "Give him back!"...

Scott is a wise one...

So...which are you? Athiest or agnostic? o.O Those are complete opposites on the religious spectrum! dxD

Aw...that was a sweet yet funny note to James...

"I had read somewhere that when you write a note and you burn it, the note finds its way up to angels."
Really?

*jaw drops* I kinda saw that coming when she saw Scott with that look, but it still gets me everytime! d:P

dxD! So...is your master going to be pleased with the lil Brit boys you bring home? dxD

._.'

d:D My dad's phrases are becoming famous! lol

"the quote with said cat."
Ha, whenever I hear anyone else say or I myself say "said *blank*" I automatically think to Pirates of the Carribbean and Jack Sparrow's questionable dialogue. dxD

Wow, really? That stuff about said queen?
EWW!! Omg I'm not gonna wear my rings anymore dxD

"“When you wish on a falling star, it is only burning meteorite hurtling to the Earth about to obliterate all of mankind so your wish won’t come true at all. Unless your wish was to die by meteorite.”" HA! Makes sense d:P

"“Dirty blonde.”

“Okay,” he agreed with me then stopped when I started to snicker. “You’re thinking of something perverted, aren’t you?”

“Yeah.”

“Dang, Mel.”

“I can’t help it.”

“It’s okay, it’s not your fault you’re such a big pervert.”

I shrugged. “It’s not.”"
Hehe, who didn't see that coming? dxD So funny d:D

O.o

...

Dah!! Update soon!

"Ooh. Oh, no he di’int."

Ha, gets me everytime. d:D

Yes, damn the facial expressions.

"Jack soon knocked on our door and I forced Scott to carry the bags, like a proper gentleman should do. On the way down the elevator, I bounced up and down and giggled when Jack laughed out loud at my childishness.

“I’m in England!” I sang happily.

“She’s a little slow, huh?” Jack thrust his thumb at me and laughed.

“Just a little,” Scott laughed along with him."
LMAO!! dxD

Wow, don't let that beauty of a love goddess hear you say that d:P

"They high-fived, like the primitive car-loving beasts they were."
HAHAHAHA!

Very good chapter. You just keep on rolling, huh? xD

And you're very welcome for reading.

But then again, how could I not read it? :P

HA! Go Mel! d:D

Tsk tsk tsk...what did we say about you being out so late? Erm...early? dxD

Good song. d:)

Aww...

And another good song of course d:)

How appropriate, yes? d:)

Cute. Can't wait for the next chapter. I may go read Scott's pov now d:P

... Huh.

What a twist? O.o

I assure Mel that she is a strong person...every one breaks down every so often, but the strong are the ones that try to fight it. d:)

"But we’re not going anywhere at all. This relationship isn’t healthy for me and every time I have to say goodbye to you, my heart breaks a little more.”

I know that feeling well...with Anthony dearest, as a matter of fact...at least for a while...

Aah...good song. Horrible timing. dx)

Lol...definitely gay. dxD

Oh...
Damn. dxD

"I wasn’t stupid. I wasn’t going to go galloping off with the first guy that invites me to a bar. And then the thought of Scott made me want to get drunk."

Tsk tsk tsk...Mel...d:P

Very good chapter. Can't wait for the next.

Does something happen and Scott comes to save the day? d:D lol

Hm...weird guy sitting next to you two...

Sheesh. Nosy bastard, ain't he? dxD

Aw...yeah, it would be weird to have lil Art's running around if they were Mel & Scott's kids, huh?

You didn't kill him, Mel! D:p

He's lying! LYING!! LIAR, Scott! Bad Scott! (backhands Scott)

Sorry...my hopeless romantic side is just dying to get in on the review >

Still writing like a master, Mel. xD

And I must say I'm still looking at myself as a role model. And for those that read this and are confused, trust me, it's confusing to me, too. xD

Heh...I like the last two texts he sent. Very comical in such a...dreary situation, for lack of any better term *that currently comes to mind*

Eep...a 17 year old and a 13 year old, huh? Yep. Art agrees with Luke: Just a tad bit weird. d:O

"Boring" is the last thing that comes to mind when one thinks of Mel and her alter-ego *cough*Lynna*cough*, I assure you.
d:P

Tsk tsk tsk...that pretty, sharp blade is not Mel's friend...

Any of this actually happening this senior year...? (suspicious look) Is that why you were wearing your jacket today...? o.O

Woah...

I remember "David" d:(

Aw...

Heh Mortion City Soundtrack rocks d:D

Wow...Mel loses it, Lexie has the possibility of losing it...eek

Lynna, are you gonna lose it sometime soon too? D:

You didn't kill him, Mel!

Omg this is such a cool story!
Very Sexual >_>

And it's cool because
IM IN IT!

But i'm dead o_O
Hi im James Luu and im DEAD

THANX MEL!! LOL

Haha bye love you O_o maybe :P

Meg Cabut...why does that name sound so familiar?? d:O

Dude, I would totally eat your pancakes! d:D ... o.o wait..that came out wrong...

Lol nice boob comment dxD

Nice chapter. Graphic. d:O Mel, Art is shocked with this! lol jk d:P